Episode 20: Creating Character Empathy

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Story beginnings vary, but empathy remains key. How do we make readers connect with our characters instantly?

1. Highlight Extraordinary Qualities: Think Buffy's strength or Sherlock's intellect.

2. Position in a Unique World: Like Mark Watney's survival on Mars or the Gilmores in quirky Stars Hollow.

3. The "Save the Cat" Moment: Showcase a kind act, like Buffy befriending the outcast, Willow.

Combine these for a character that resonates deeply with readers!

Romance Roadmap: https://ineswrites.com/romancemap

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Episode 20: Creating Character Empathy

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Story beginnings vary, but empathy remains key. How do we make readers connect with our characters instantly?

1. Highlight Extraordinary Qualities: Think Buffy's strength or Sherlock's intellect.

2. Position in a Unique World: Like Mark Watney's survival on Mars or the Gilmores in quirky Stars Hollow.

3. The "Save the Cat" Moment: Showcase a kind act, like Buffy befriending the outcast, Willow.

Combine these for a character that resonates deeply with readers!

Romance Roadmap: https://ineswrites.com/romancemap

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I've noticed eight rules for packs in shifter romance. Wanna know what they are? Listen to this episode on Paranormal Pack Rules!

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Have you been paying attention to the evolution of the Cinderella story? Young girls and women are no longer waiting around for a man to come by on his horse, sweep them off their feet, and give them shoes…Okay, I doubt any of us would turn down the shoes!

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In “Moll Flanders,” Daniel Defoe aimed to pen a tale of a heroine who faced a life of poverty, perversion, and penitence. Instead, the title character was an unlikeable heroine with surprisingly few empathetic qualities and a negative character arc showing that not women are heroines.

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Episode 27: The BM of the Flame and the Flower 8:40

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A BM is a big misunderstanding. What? What did you think it was? This is my least favorite craft technique. I also don't appreciate them as a reader. But I've found that they abound as a plotting device in early romances like "The Flame and the Flower" by Kathleen E Woodiwiss. In this episode, I break it down.…

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Episode 26: Bodice Ripper Part 2 22:23

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I presented my first academic paper on romance. It got rave reviews and I'd like to present it to you in two parts. It's entitled From Bodice Rippers to Booktok. Ready? Here's Part 2!

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Episode 25 Bodice Rippers Part One 12:11

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I presented my first academic paper on romance. It got rave reviews and I'd like to present it to you in two parts. It's entitled From Bodice Rippers to Booktok. Ready? Here's Part One!

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Episode 24: Pulling off a Grand Gesture 7:22

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Grand gestures are significant in romance as they heighten emotions and often bring about resolution or clarity in relationships. They're powerful tools in a writer's arsenal to amplify the romantic stakes. If you're plotting scenes, integrating such moments can evoke strong reactions from readers. FIVE TYPES OF GRAND GESTURES Declaration: The gesture could be a simple declaration of love, especially if the hero isn't good at showing feelings. The ILU should come from a genuine place of love and commitment, rather than being motivated by external factors or social pressure. Public: The grand gesture is often a public act, meant to declare the hero or heroine's love to the world and show their commitment to their partner. Rescue: If one lover is in peril, then the other needs to rescue them at great danger to their own person. Personalization: The grand gesture should be tailored to the specific needs and desires of the hero or heroine, and reflect their unique relationship dynamic. Sacrifice: Similar to a rescue where the hero's life is in danger due to the action, they could willingly offer themselves in exchange for the heroine.…

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Episode 23: Surviving Dark Moments 10:01

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The Dark Moment is a crucial scene in a romance novel, where the hero and/or heroine face a major obstacle or challenge that threatens to tear or keep them apart. This moment typically occurs towards the end of the story, and creates a sense of tension and conflict that the hero and/or heroine must overcome in order to achieve a happy ending. Here's my list: • a revelation of a deep secret or betrayal. • a misunderstanding or miscommunication that creates a rift between the hero and heroine. • a life-changing event that shakes up their world. • an external force, like an antagonist, physical obstruction, or mystic force, pushing them apart. The inner obstruction wouldn't apply here. • Internal issues or insecurities Romance Roadmap: https://ineswrites.com/romancemap Want to write a Bingeworthy Novel in 21 days, check out my course Page Turner Pacing at https://ineswrites.com/PTP…

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In the romance genre, the "fun and games" phase is pivotal, marked by budding connections and escalating stakes. 1. Buddy Love: From initial friction to deep bonds, relationships often mirror dynamics from buddy films like Lethal Weapon. 2. Romance Beats: Gwen Hayes highlights the crescendo of feelings, leading to relationship turning points. 3. Obstacles: Using tales like Cinderella and Shrek as guides, love stories can interweave challenges from antagonists, physical barriers, internal conflicts, to mystical hurdles. Romance Roadmap: https://ineswrites.com/romancemap Want to write a Bingeworthy Novel in 21 days, check out my course Page Turner Pacing at https://ineswrites.com/PTP…

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Episode 21: Directing Meet Cutes 8:42

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Episode 20: Creating Character Empathy 6:52

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Story beginnings vary, but empathy remains key. How do we make readers connect with our characters instantly? 1. Highlight Extraordinary Qualities: Think Buffy's strength or Sherlock's intellect. 2. Position in a Unique World: Like Mark Watney's survival on Mars or the Gilmores in quirky Stars Hollow. 3. The "Save the Cat" Moment: Showcase a kind act, like Buffy befriending the outcast, Willow. Combine these for a character that resonates deeply with readers! Romance Roadmap: https://ineswrites.com/romancemap…

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Genres like comedy, science fiction, and horror have their classics, but what defines quintessential romance? From iconic authors such as Kathleen E. Woodiwiss to modern BookTok faves, we delve into romance's evolving heart. We'll trace tropes from the 'bodice ripper' era, understand the enduring allure of 'enemies to lovers', and see how societal views on love have shaped narratives. Ready to dive deep? Join us as we kick off with the pivotal romance novel, "The Flame and the Flower". Want to learn more about pacing, try my courses Page Turner Pacing Course https://ineswrites.com/PTP…

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Ines Johnson is having a bit of a breakdown... so she's going on summer break!

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Episode 18: Give Me a Beat 9:27

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Grab your copy of my Give Me a Beat worksheet to help you craft your next amazing love story! https://ineswrites.com/give-me-a-beat-docx/

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Episode 17: RomCom Beats 4:51

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These episode is all about the Romance Beats. Want to make sure readers fall in love with your love story? Then be sure and follow these seven beats! ORDINARY WORLD MEET CUTE ADHESION FUN AND GAMES Dark Moment Grand Gesture HEA or HFN

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Episode 16: Mystery Beats 7:02

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Mysteries and Thrillers are similar in beats with a few differences. Check out this episode to get clued into the mystery beats. THE CRIME ADHESION TO THE CASE INITIAL THEORY THREE SUSPECTS AND A KILLER REMINDER OF DANGER HERO IN PERIL (ALL IS LOST) SPEECH IN PRAISE OF THE VILLAIN/WHO DUNNIT RESOLUTION…

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Episode 15 Thriller Beats 17:44

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I believe there are 7 Beats -obligatory scenes that readers or viewers expect- in a thriller; particularly romantic suspense. Come learn all about The Crime or Threat Adhesion to the Case The Initial Theory Three Bangs and an Explosion Reminder of Danger Speech in Praise of the Villain (Why/How Dunnit) Resolution…

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Episode 14: PNR Beats 8:24

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Want a breakdown of the beats of Paranormal Romance? This episode lists the nine beats I believe are common in all romances that feature werewolves, vampires, fae and other kinds of supernatural beings.

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Episode13 AIDA 6:19

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You just finished writing thousands and thousands of words in your manuscript and told an emotional love story with kissing. But wait, you're not done. Now you have to write a couple hundred words to sell that story.

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Episode 12 Adaptations 6:39

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Faith is a tricky subject when it comes to taking someone else's work and making it your own. Following Krevolin's rules of originality, seeking without destroying, keeping the key things, while maintaining the character arc can get you through adapting a work as short as a newspaper headline or as long as a 500-plus page novel.…

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Episode 11 The Obstacle Course 7:27

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Did you know there's only four types of obstacles that your protagonist can face? They are an Antagonist, Physical Obstruction, Inner/Psychology Problems, or a Mystic Force. Let's break these four down with a trip to Disneyland! Want to learn more about pacing, try my courses Page Turner Pacing Course https://ineswrites.com/PTP Writing Sweet at ineswrites.com/writingsweet Writing Dirty at ineswrites.com/writingdirty…

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Episode 10 Twelve Bases of Intimacy 10:44

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There aren't three bases in the game of love. There are twelve. Find out the twelve levels of intimacy in this episode. Want to learn more about pacing, try my courses Page Turner Pacing Course https://ineswrites.com/PTP Writing Sweet at ineswrites.com/writingswee

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Episode 9 Steamy Emotional Arc 12:34

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In a romance novel, the love scenes should be integral to the plot. Otherwise it's just description that readers will gloss over to get back to the important action. Best beats or pacing points for a love scene are scenes of Growth, Setbacks or Regroups because those are scenes where characters tend to grow, learn, and evolve emotionally. Want to learn more about pacing, try my courses Page Turner Pacing Course https://ineswrites.com/PTP Writing Sweet at ineswrites.com/writingsweet Writing Dirty at ineswrites.com/writingdirty…

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Episode 8 Romance Beats 9:15

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In addition to the twelve pacing points that we talked about previously, each genre of popular fiction has beats that readers are expecting see or hear. If you don't hit these beats in your story its like a record scratch. Wanna know the beats I hear every time I read, write, or listen to a love story?…

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Episode 7 Buttons 9:22

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Buttons are like punctuation marks. Like a period, exclamation point, or question mark, a button is a punctuation mark at the end of an act in a show or a scene (or chapter) in a book. To use these in writing treat the end of your chapters like commercial breaks and turn that last sentence into a question mark, or send in the ellipses in that last bit of dialogue, or add a dash that forces the reader to turn the page.…

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Episode 6 Pet the Dog 6:36

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The Pet the Dog moment can be used to remind us of the stakes of your story before the big battle or ordeal your hero must face. But you can also use it for the villain, or the bad boy, to humanize them and add more conflict to your story by giving the reader pause to consider changing, or challenging, their loyalties.…

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Episode 5 Empathy for the Cat 8:37

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The Save the Cat scene is where we meet the hero and the hero does something to make us identify or empathize with them. I know of three ways to establish empathy and make readers instantly get the feels for characters.You showcase their extraordinary qualities. Or their ordinariness in an extraordinary world. Or you have them save a cat from a tree or a dumpster in a shoot out.…

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Episode 4: The Novice 7:58

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A better way to do an infodump of backstory is to use a Novice. The Novice enters the story when we do. They're also brand new to this world, but they're in the story so they can ask the questions we're dying to know, be shown the process of the way the world works, try to model the behaviors of the customs of the people, and make mistakes and get set straight to ensure we all understand.…

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Episode 3: Story Question 10:09

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Next time you're tempted to write a prologue, determine if you might be better served by a teaser to give your readers a Slice of Life of your world, or Set Up your character's Story question that you'll answer by the end of the book.

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Episode 2: Teasers vs Prologues 6:22

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A teaser has three jobs; it had to be immediate, quick and grab attention. It gets you ready for the meat of the episode. It's like an amuse bouche that leaves you wanting more before you're served the main dish.

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